Comments of chapter undefined of Immortal Ice Empress: Path to Vengeance

I like when it’ a mix of both. Mira’s pov when situaions cal for it and 3rd person narrative when dealing with generalities.l

I prefer Mira POV, or at least POV of people close to Mira.

I think it was a cool way of showing exactly what Mira is going through, however, I don’t desire for it to become a common occurrence. I particularly enjoy Mira’s pov and dislike it when characters that I know will die very quickly are given too many lines as it feels like a waste of time. This chapter however made a lot of sense to be written in this way and hence I enjoyed it. Would be happy to read this style again every once in a while but to switch it over to this completel would make it difficult to continue to read.

It's a good mix, this was well done because it was a short and sweet and concise episode of a different group. There are other novels that delve 10-15 chapters into a different persons POV to discuss their whole backstory and way of living… only for that info to not even be relevant later, or only one aspect being relevant for a short period of time. Yours was done well here, again, because it explored a portion of what Mira’ s bloodlust is aimed at. In the future, POVs of people close to Mira would be fine too. A few chapters showing what Maria is up to would be fine

a mix of both will be good like this chapter

good thinking writer

I think most of the pov should be Mira, the sprinkle a little bit of other people too

A mix of povs with Mira beings the primary pov

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