Comments of chapter undefined of A Sasuke with Control

Interesting, but even if she doesnt like him anymore, Hibata is too nice to let somebody lay bleeding out either

please I hope.you give her some new jutsu,and.also.hope.she.ends up way stronger than she was.in.canon

th-this is dark hinata? This hinata is impostor!!

You've completely changed hinata's personality man....hearing her talking about repopulating the clan got me cringing so hard.....that's nothing like the original hinata.

Too much force scene, too much cringe, and all of it follow canon with a little minor change. Even if hinata join him, i bet not much will change for canon cuz author will just force it to happen. What i mean is all the important events will still happen and with the same result. The only thing that will be different is, how the result are achieved.

I do find this Hinata more refreshing you know none of that stuttering crap or low confidence plus with Hinata going with the protagonist you know she's going become a lot stronger from her original character. Just hoping this doesn't become a harem.

How tf is he going to fool Orochimaru into thinking he has the curse mark?

Frankly, at this point 3 years of original content may as well be better than anything you have written so far because there hasn't been much details and you also used quite a lot of time skip so not much characters interactions and this no character development either.

OK, honestly this fanfic is good, really good, like 90% good. But there's one thing that make this story plummeted in quality, Hinata's character. She is way too OOC. It's like you just flip a switch in her character and force her so she can be with sasuke. Everything about her in this chapter is wrong, horribly wrong.

Stupid. first off Hinata wouldn’t suddenly start liking him after liking naruto for so long, and she definitely wouldn’t di this

please have sasuke meet karin

Yo hinata would not even survive leaving the village. do you know the extrnt the hyuga clan would go to make sure the byakugan stays in the clan......in canon tsunade basically let sasuke leave

Trash too forced And cringe lololol learn to write lol

Still dont like Hinata. I would have chosen her sister instead or Cat.

its cool and all but its out of hinata character

Ok I can assume that you aren't really used to write things like this so... I'll just gloss over this chapter hoping that it'll get better.

Love it

Hope the next chapter comes out soon. well keep up the good work author

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