Comments of chapter undefined of A SUPER RICH GUY

Needs alot of editing and so many grammatical mistakes.

Merci beaucoup pour cette histoire je mai sans bien [img=recommend][img=recommend]

this story would be better if the author corrected the grammar ,has so much potential but sadly unless the grammar is corrected is to annoying to follow.

needs a lot of editing is a bit confusing.. she/he/his /him and her are all the same

please assign the right gender ( noun, possessive words ...) to the characters such as Lisa (she, her, hers...) and not mixing the gender words. very confusing. Lisa is a female not a transgender. thanks. keep on with the writing.[img=recommend]

I know it's hard when English is a second language because there are so many ways to say boys/girls but it makes following the plot harder if we have to figure it out every time. Maybe make a chart or ask for help.

the writer should edited the mistakes on every page before released the chapter..

6/15/21💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖

please do correction on grammar