story in the Philippines

carnation is to give for funerals or dead in persons not for romantic dinner!!!! weird dinner from a boy coming rich family. a sugar cane plantation in California, San Diego???? please!!!!😂

mix of Chinese and Indian cultures? The king's wives are not empresses. A butler is a household servant, not a woman.

confusing writing.

Lisa is a girl, a daughter. Please use the proper appellation : she, her dad, her... that is aggravating.

please assign the right gender ( noun, possessive words ...) to the characters such as Lisa (she, her, hers...) and not mixing the gender words. very confusing. Lisa is a female not a transgender. thanks. keep on with the writing.[img=recommend]

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the numbers from the split of the comoany shares do not add up. If grandpa gave 60% to 2nd son and 40% to 1st son, how come 1st son family has 20% and grandpa has 5%?

great flowing written story. keep up the great work...[img=recommend][img=coins]

Who pays the rental for a room a year in advance? a month yes. not logical, kind stupid. Escape a rapist to meet a sadist, worst than a rapist? Crazy writing plot?

super great writing. so enthralling. Too bad that is such a jerk. Keep up with the great work. [img=recommend]

very nice story of a cute couple. nice flowing writing style. [img=recommend]

nice writing. nice flow. keep up the good work[img=recommend]

good writing. crazy drunk *** at the night club toilet[img=faceslap]

great flowing written story. Very exciting to read. Please keep up on the great work [img=recommend][img=coins]

so super long sentences. confused ideas

Hi. Congrats on your efforts on writing a story on English. Can you make your sentences shorter? It is kind confusing. Writing is different from talking. Please continue on writing in shorter sentences. Giod luck and Happy safe year in 2021.

great writer. very interesting story[img=recommend]

very fast pace reading because it is so thrilling, bewitching . thumbs up!!!