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Comments of chapter undefined of The System: Civilian Shinobi

ANUPAM_BISWAS
ANUPAM_BISWASLv3ANUPAM_BISWAS

Knowing that Kabuto ran away...Mann I would have busted those bo*bs of the lady I saw in front of me....Mann so careless and almost no reaction from Tobi..Fu*k.....He is working so hard for the village and the village is careless in every matter... first they let his teacher die...even after he informed them that Kabuto has Kage level chakra...and after that they even let him get freed...Mann I am starting to dislike->hate the MC because of his overzealous support for the village....he even agrees to marry after knowing Danzo used him....Mann if the MC becomes so insensitive I guess I will have to stop reading the novel.... just my opinion..... No hard feelings towards the Author....

ANUPAM_BISWAS
ANUPAM_BISWASLv3ANUPAM_BISWAS

about that he got to know about it when he awakened his own Sharigan... just read a few chapters before...it was notified to him by the system...at first he thought it was Itachi who used genjutsu on him but late he got the memories back....about Danzo manipulating him....

Ravi_Shankar131103:about danzo he used kotoamatsukami so it would not matter if tobi agrees or disagrees and ratting out danzo to hokage isnt possible as he shouldnt know about kotoamatsukami
darkimortal
darkimortalLv6darkimortal

Is the MC going to keep getting shafted by everyone in power? And what's up with his defeated mindset, he's a gamer but his attitude is that of a background character. He has very little confidence in himself even though he's the most cheat character.

Bogg_Dann
Bogg_DannLv4Bogg_Dann

She said said he agreed to be in that marriage, why didnt he correct since he didnt actually agree, and why the **** didnt he agree to cancel the marriage?

Asura_666
Asura_666Lv5Asura_666

Political marriage and babysitting medics.WTF happened to the story.The MC is like being used by both the bad and good guys.

eclairsshi
eclairsshiLv4eclairsshi

Seriously this marriage thing is a whole of a mess. And i think many reader feels the same way. Meh, i don't like any romance anyway, cus usually it will be just fast forced of 2 characters or an overly chummy and cringe dialogues. And please, make the mc a little more selfish and stand up for himself. Don't make him be another itachi whom idiotically loyal to village (though itachi has more solid reason). Especially after what a supposedly village elder did to him. Did he not have any suspicion at all to Danzo after the whole mind control thing ?!

ErozothDraeor
ErozothDraeorLv6ErozothDraeor

Agree with most of the top comments, the story is going down a path of no return, no one likes an MC with no personality, and in that world that was they try to have the fighters be, weapons. You notice that usually the "evil" ones have the most personality. Personally, not likely to keep reading if it keeps going as is, I just don't like that passive, borderline pathetic MC that lets others control his life to any extent, following orders because he feels loyalty to the village is fine to a degree, loyalty goes both ways. He was already betrayed by the village (Yes, Danzo counts since he is protected by the village). You can claim its normal behavior for people in that world and for the most part its true but we already know some of them (the big "bad" ones) were smart enough to think otherwise and considering the MC has a system he should have broader perspective.

Aaron313
Aaron313Lv14Aaron313

so regular missions, Abu missions periodically and trying to have him teach medical ninjutsu? author you're not forgetting that your MC is only 12 right? even Itachi or Minato wasn't burdened with as much stuff as this. I get that you want Tsunade to notice his medical Ninjutsu but even she would make as dumb as a decisions as to add more 2 his already full plate and have the MC complain some more yes he has a system but he's still human he's not some machine

Daoist184799
Daoist184799Lv4Daoist184799

It feels like the mc is being pushed around by authorities for their agenda and he is fine with it because he wants to be like the fourth hokage. I never supported ino she defended sasuke when the mc and him fought and it left a bad taste in my mouth. Ans temari is acting like a bitch. so far I haven't seen a worthwile pairing for the mc. no pairing will be actually a bit better.

Weirdo
WeirdoLv6Weirdo

Holy cow boy.... She may thought that it's a good idea, but are you sure Tobi? You can be stronger faster when you are a hunter nin ANBU, but be a sensei? That will seriously makes your progress slow as fvck and you will lose your momentum as strongest one in your generation... After 2year time skip, you will be surpassed and most will catch up if you didn't continue as hunter nin..

SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST
SUBSCRIBE_MY_LISTLv5SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST

Guys, remind me please, did he have anye love interests going on before the arranged marriage and if so, who? I am following a few too many naruto fics to be able to differentiate them all perfectly.... Didn't thus guy have something going on with tenten?

SEPPIA
SEPPIALv4SEPPIA

at this point I just hope his parents die somehow so that he breaks away from the village and doesn't grow up to be a brainwashed soldier and do whatever he is told. Especially that the village first of all. traumatic event -》 understand that you are a puppet in the hands of others -》 become independent and go out of the village

Hashish
HashishLv5Hashish

Marriage!? You got married? Did I miss something?

3RR0R_404
3RR0R_404Lv43RR0R_404

You know, now I want his parents to just die so his subservient attitude go away. Make him have a goal or something, an ambition that will make him get serious with life for once

GodSpeed28
GodSpeed28Lv4GodSpeed28

Seriously! Stop being a door-mat, Tobi!!

Ravi_Shankar131103
Ravi_Shankar131103Lv4Ravi_Shankar131103

author-san pleaseeee keep tobi with ino i mean temari is good n all but she simply isnt tobi waifu material

George_WEB
George_WEBLv6George_WEB

If tsunade Only take Sakura as an apprentice After all that I Will cal nepotism card . Because Tobi should learn the super strengh and the strengh of a hundred seals from her at least for all the favor he is doing for konoha.

egis3
egis3Lv10egis3

Ding...... Hidden Perk: Brainwashed (2/3): Int & Wis reduced by 20%

Ahtu_Flagg
Ahtu_FlaggLv4Ahtu_Flagg

The MC is arrogant and overconfident asf. But he needs to grow some balls and brains of his own. He's turning into a tool, an npc to follow a script laid out for him.

MightyHeart
MightyHeartLv5MightyHeart

Did the author go through an arranged marriage or something? I'm starting to think he's keeping the marriage between Tobi and Temari, because he wants the character to go through the samething..... Or you know harem of blondes hehe XD #harem#blonde

danjuma
danjumaLv6danjuma

Thanks for the chapter