Aravind_S
Maple city đ¤Ł
I don't think our mc is very fortunate though. His parents died because of it đ
Another great chapter I wonder if the little boy would remember how his parents died.
adding the dying parents is always useless to the story. We gain nothing; the mc gains nothing;the author gains nothing.
Possible to write more than 600 words per chapter or what?
Chapter three and story is great so far !
very cool chapter but there should be " " at the beginging and the end of a senctance after the period
Sci-fi vibes gets stronger and stronger
Nice nice nice
I am truly enjoying this story.