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Comments of chapter undefined of Lucifer's Descendant System

Procrastinate
ProcrastinateLv11Procrastinate

only thing you need to work on is conveying characters emotions. otherwise this s reslky good story. Grammar isn't bad. this seems like a solid story with potential

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Bird_0f_Hermes
Bird_0f_HermesLv4Bird_0f_Hermes

Read till now. It is going pretty well. Though I doubt you will just keep the flame ability, I wanted to say it; please have him obtain more abilities other than the fire, later on. Like Lucifer, hell, death, etc related. That would be cool.

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Robert_Mattison
Robert_MattisonLv15Robert_Mattison

Quickly becoming a favorite read, can't wait to see his powers develope

puukkiss
puukkissLv3puukkiss

I have a question. Why does Noah, who supposedly used his brains to survive, sneaks around with only a knife? No traps, no decoys, no lures, no other clever ways to fight. He simply fought the same way others did. The best way to compare it is that he thinks he's a wizard, when in reality he's a rogue who fights like a warrior, without rogue tricks. He sneaks, finds a single rat, and then fights like everyone else with a knife... No dirty or imaginative tricks or anything to show that he really survived because of his intelligence. Right now he appears smart just because everyone else is dumbed down. So what if they have powers, if 50% of people die in the first few years, I would not put my ass on the line just to feel cocky. Besides, even if they did have teenager braindead syndrome, their parents would kick their asses in shape. It almost seems like the people of the world do not care if their kids die. The writers had surrounded MC with stupid, unreal teenagers just to make him seem smarter and more *****. At this point, our world has more safety precautions when climbing mountains than in that world have when dungeon diving. Author, just because MC is the smartest person among dumb people, doesn't make us readers think MC is smart. It only makes MC a king of monkeys.

WingsOfZynx
WingsOfZynxLv2WingsOfZynx

Okay Wendy genuinely annoys me. Like jeez I get wanting to survive, but her attitude towards Amy as well as Noah infuriates me. No right to scorn Amy for her own willingness to listen to prejudice. Can Wendy be next on the hit-list?

House
HouseLv15House

I like how calculating the MC is and that he does not want to save everyone. Those are the MC's I like.

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DestonDark
DestonDarkLv6DestonDark

Thanks for the good chapter

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ReimanCordeiro
ReimanCordeiroLv13ReimanCordeiro

Very good story 👍

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Yato_a
Yato_aLv4Yato_a

Thanks for posting!

Alpha_Ace
Alpha_AceLv4Alpha_Ace

Exp

acabate
acabateLv1acabate

The writer of this novel is a brazilian youtuber called "Zy" that was exposed a few months ago for exchanging nude pictures with an underage girl that was one of his subscribers. She was around 15.

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sanyuky
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gracias por el cap

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juju_sprouts
juju_sproutsLv5juju_sprouts

Thanks for the chapter

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Shameless_Buddha
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Thanks for the chapter 😊

Meanesx
MeanesxLv4Meanesx

👍

Edd_9386
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The writer of this novel is a brazilian youtuber called "Zy" that was exposed a few months ago for exchanging nude pictures with an underage girl that was one of his subscribers. She was around 15.v

Kbffhh_Njvfghhh
Kbffhh_NjvfghhhLv1Kbffhh_Njvfghhh

Thanks for the chapter💕

DaoIsLife
DaoIsLifeLv12DaoIsLife

Nice

Gweek_Patato
Gweek_PatatoLv1Gweek_Patato

exp

tallie
tallieLv2tallie

man, your story is giving me a lot of inspiration and ideas to develop my novel. Not to mention the story, which gets more interesting with every chapter. I'm also having a crush on Noel hehehe. Keep it up!!

sunflower1
sunflower1Lv10sunflower1

thanks for the chapter. one of the best I ever read