I would say it’s a pretty good novel with a lot of potential. I hope you’ll fix chapter 10.
Only downside is the grammar mistakes, but they aren’t really that bad, also somewhat short chapters.
Hope you’ll kill Xiao Yan
Thanks for the chapter👌
the story is not bad, but it's better for him to pair up with someone other than gu xun er. make a different story don't steal from the protagonist because mc itself has a system. because it's more exciting like the thing with the story of the wish of the dragon
I read something similar somewhere. I remembered the scene of "jealousy". Is this a translation or did you delete the book and create a new profile? I don’t think I gave up the fanfiction for this fandom.