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Comments of chapter undefined of Thomas Prest: A Simple Magician

Lord666Acedia
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Whelp It was pretty good while it lasted Got to hand it to you author You were building a pretty sweet story With good grammar and structure

Sunnyfest_Gender
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nooooo, please don't leave us, your fanfiction is one of the best, and if you leave, then there will be no goodness left

No_No_4004
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I get it if you are burned out and stop posting for a while but it is kinda sad that you are dropping the story completely. I hope you come back to the story and I also hope that your original story goes well.

FrozenAce
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dang that's sad

Username_Redacted
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Thank you for what you have written already.

Bad_news
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Nooo Return to us please How could you burn out Just open yourself to others an receiving new suggestion from your readers Marvel... Dxd.... Harry Potter.. So much possiblity It's impossible to run out of plot...

DSKM
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thank you for the journey so far.

mow
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After all the unnecessary filler chapters/arc that was the HP arc...we get this?

Bad_news
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For natasha romanoff sake reconsider returning to us..

whitethief274
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i was somewhat sure that this is going to get dropped along the line.

Bad_news
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Nooo Very sad Very shocked

AenarionVoldigoad
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You ruined the story by burdening him with Hermione and her nonsense

Lucifer9999
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really..mahn... if you drop...

Daoistblackwind
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webnovels should be known as the place where fanfics never finish

BTOOOM_18
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Thanks for the chapter. I am very sad for the end of the story I was very hooked. Now I can only cross my fingers in hope that it continues.

Permadi_Wibisono
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well, when the dxd story was crossover with the mcu it had made a lot of plot holes so the story was terrible but hoped the writer could adjust the story, but when the story entered the world of Harry Potter everything turned out to be less interesting again, well of course we have to finish this arc, but when the writer makes more and more worlds that are crossover, it depends on his nature to make the story unpredictable and interesting or boring and weird. Well, before when the writer made a crossover story with the MCU, I have to thank you because I have reassessed the story plot from DxD, I myself have made what kind of plot is good in my mind, like why does MC have to be stuck in England, the story will be interesting if he explores the world of DxD first to strengthen the sacred gear, I want to see what kind of plot is made with wakanda and benchmarks, what about Thanos, it is indeed a plot hole, but you can make a connecting line with the gods and goddesses in dxd, and also many gods died in the demon war 400 years ago that's right, just make Thanos like the Greek Titan or Jotun Nordic, and what about ophis, redgret and trihexa(666), I hope at least the three of them know about the destiny of MC, or can make MC power up, and what about God of Dead Bibles, and let's not forget the Skrulls/Kree and Celestials and Eternals, those plots can either be added to the story or deleted. well that's just a little thought from me, thank you in advance.

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Lucifer9999
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😠😠😠😠😠😠

ArtisticSteel
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Thank you and Good luck in your future endevors.

Ecchi_cloud
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that is sad to hear but I understand that you have a desire to branch out and while I had always held out some hope that you might do a rewrite for your Thomas Cair story, I just hope that you will find fulfillment in your latest ventures

asssssshhole
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no wonder youre stopping your own patreon page.