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Comments of chapter undefined of Brockwing Vale

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Brockwing Vale

Craig_Beckham

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pirvu_mircea
pirvu_mirceaLv3pirvu_mircea

It's not The Plot that's' hard to understand . It's the writing of The Plot that's hard to understand because some things make no sense . For example , the MC is sitting in His Castle(I'm talking about this chapter) staring at his murderous ex-girlfriend's grave? when suddenly, an Unknown Entity that doesn't even speak his language comes and beckons the MC to follow him and HE FOLLOWS . What would be logical is to RECONVENE with his BUDDIES AND MOM to talk SENSE in a SAFE PLACE(E.G throne room or dream lake or something). What we get is MC following an unidentified intruder .

1yr
Craig_Beckham
Craig_BeckhamAuthorCraig_Beckham

Thanks for reading this far! Honestly, this story was my 'creative sandbox' and if you asked me now what happened, I couldn't tell you 😂 I've only kept it live because it's under contract. I appreciate your feedback, though.

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Crystal_Chicken
Crystal_ChickenLv11Crystal_Chicken

Im so confused on whats happening everything is so hard to understand I have no idea what the heck im reading Or what was going on With the castle battles and other things

2yr
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Craig_Beckham
Craig_BeckhamAuthorCraig_Beckham

That's understandable; there is a lot to take in. Jake's realm (Brockwing Vale) is under attack by everyone wishing to stake a claim; some were friends, and others, strangers. And this subplot, among many others, will continue throughout the story. Like I said, there are a lot of moving parts to the story, with a complex plot that spans multiple realms, so if there's anything specific you don't understand, I'll do my best to explain it. Thanks again for reading as much as you did; I appreciate it.

2yr
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