Comments of chapter undefined of Lord of Annihilation
Lord of Annihilation
C0nstance
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Now I have to drop a fucking good novel thanks for making this a good piece of shit. mc becomes a pussy and now he have two train her and the other dude and make them stronger and he got fucking manipulated of that bitch crystal thing like she’s over 300 years old and she act like a 14 years old girl who’s crush doesn’t like her and what’s up whit him losing and feeling any kinds of emotions every time he tries to kill her or he sees someone he knows back in the days ‘you know what I mean’ and how can he forgive her after all she’s done like how did she even got back in time whit him didn’t she die by that gray fog 🤦
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C0nstance
A betrayal is a betrayal and this issue has always been sensitive among readers. Author, you might be thinking that you portrayed a good excuse for her betrayal, well actually it wasn't a betrayal as she was reacting to changes? So if someone gives the Aphrodite to mc girl and girl is just unable to control herself and lost her sense of reasoning, does that mean she is reacting to changes and not actually betraying MC? answer is NO! The only case where betrayal can be excused is when it's cause is misunderstanding. Otherwise in my dictionary and rule, no reason works for betrayal. I'd rather have her die than chose to do things like a betrayer behind the girl's back. Now one might argue that she didn't lie to mc, and was forced to cut soul link, but the fact can't be excused that she admitted having lied to mc once. So in one simple word, if author you're going to take voting on whether she deserve death or not,Id bet majority of the readers would pick "She deserves death" and you can even get such feeling after seeing the number of likes people such comments have. Now going onto the next topic, Alex being the savior of mc childhood friend, it made me feel as if author, you're shipping them but in my mind I always thought of her as MC's girl and finally when I saw her having feeling for mc, and him carrying her in a princess style, I was quite happy. Thirdly and finally, I hope to see mc maintain killer personality but seeing how that hunger personality stopped him, it made me a bit angry but also happy that he didn't kill his childhood friend even thou I hoped that he would kill that crystal girl. But nevertheless both of them are still MC's girl but after this chap, I can say it with 100 percent clarity that I'll never like this crystal girl for her betrayal as like I explained I'd rather want someone to die than have their betrayal. Other than everything is okay and very good. In fact I even liked how Alex was funny sometimes, his existence is adding sweat to a delicious dish aka your novel. He's just been funny sometimes. So concluding all of these points and dramas, I can say I liked your novel very much except this developement where crystal betrayed MC. Other than this everything has been perfect so I'll give this novel another chance and keep reading. If I'm ever to give review, instead of 5 star I'd deduct 1 star to give 4 star for crystal girl's betrayal. You might argue she didn't betrayed but like I explained, only in case of reason called 'misunderstanding' can betrayal be excused or else don't think of it
Grammar assist!: She noticed it was directed at her -> She noticed it was not directed at her was something was the norm -> was something of the norm assimilated the 'Cause' becoming another -> assimilated the 'Cause', becoming another ... Aren't we foster siblings so this is normal. -> Aren't we foster siblings? [So] This is normal! / This is normal.
I like how it was resolved with the reasoning for Kal to do everything was spontaneous so not betrayal just reacting to changes caused by their actions. Can tell the killer soul plays a part in how he is as it keeps him from getting emotional but seems he may have another soul type emerging which is possible since it seems small changes can happen as a new soul already showed up. Anyway can tell it is going in a good direction with character growth and being interesting. Some may like him to remain robotic but from my experience having a mc like that gets boring to read about after awhile so they at least need some emotional attachment like a pet, friend, lover etcetera.
