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Comments of chapter undefined of Earth's Greatest Magus

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_Shango
_ShangoLv14_Shango

That was really well written

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Emilio_Nieves
Emilio_NievesLv15Emilio_Nieves

When so many of his friends started to die y suspected it was something similar to what happened in the tournament. Glad that I was right

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Kehinde_Oloruntayo
Kehinde_OloruntayoLv14Kehinde_Oloruntayo

Oh My God!! You got me bad Avan, i thought this was real.

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Daoist7Soawc
Daoist7SoawcLv14Daoist7Soawc

Holy Lord that was impressive Avan!It's amazing how well you wrote that to be both intense and horrifying without loosing the atmosphere by revealing the plot twist absolutely master class!

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DaoistaYVnJp
DaoistaYVnJpLv15DaoistaYVnJp

You had me there.....

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Peter_Hermansson
Peter_HermanssonLv14Peter_Hermansson

Haha, had to blink and reread a few times there...

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WarStrider72
WarStrider72Lv15WarStrider72

1st

WarStrider72
WarStrider72Lv15WarStrider72

make your choice:

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cryist
cryistLv5cryist

Good attempt, but it felt like Emery’s intense desire to flee felt a little off character - he has never been portrayed as someone who would do this. Granted, this would allow for a shorter chapter and being able to close with the twist so..

Knytblade
KnytbladeLv14Knytblade

I knew it!!! That fate child was too hyped up to be killed off with negligible impact.

Lisa_Ammon
Lisa_AmmonLv15Lisa_Ammon

So they haven’t died yet. Thank the gods, cause to many of Emerys friends have died

UrBoyAD
UrBoyADLv15UrBoyAD

Man I always come back to this novel against my better judgment just to find out that Emery is still an ignorant child who never makes the correct decisions but is saved by plot armour every. single. time. Great writing, great MC that literally only cares about himself even in the beginning when he was portrayed as naive, self righteous, and good hearted. His decisions still always ended up hurting those around him. And yet never once, did he ever take responsibility for his own actions. Don’t even get me started about how this is turning into a Harem because he was never able to treat the one person who truly loved and cared about him right and yet still comes back every time. Never have I and probably will ever again hate an MC as much as I hate Emery even 2000 chapters in.