Comments of chapter undefined of Ben 10: Apex Hero
Ben 10: Apex Hero
Daichi_TBR193
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Author maybe you can add a tsundere villain girl who tries taking attention of Ben 10yson but it ends up destroyin somewhere and taking attention of alien polices where Grandpa Max belongs to . It can be an og or you can use some rich technology genius' daughter . But it needs a lot character grow so it can be a challenge for your writing skills (a lot of author can find it hard i am not trying joking you or something . Why they can find hard because if the character showns up and love directly Ben in 1 or 2 chapters it looks bad childish and unconsidered .if you can add emotions opimions character goal and others she will be perfect ) . As a joke you can make the girl what i say a boy and make him a gay who have his own story it will be OMG ... do not take the last part serious . We are not ready for something like this but maybe a reverse trap can be good but it is not fit a novel like this ... or is it fit ?
as it is always good to have new chapters, it would only be better if it were every day xD. - Although it would not be bad for you to update your Harry Potter story, I am in the best part xD. - and from "ben 10", it would be nice to see some romance xD.
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AMAZING, But I was hoping for a bit in the development of their romance, although the fact that Gwen is showing that she certainly sees him as a boy and not only her cousin is good, I also wonder what kind of jokes Lucy played on her, and when Max will talk to They about their grandmother, but what I want most is to see Kate and Ben in a closer way 7u7
Personalmente no creo en los crossover pero seria genial un encuentro con Rex como la película héroes unidos por cierto muchos pensarían que este ben es el más fuerte lo cierto es que puede crecer más ejemplo hacerse la mejor versión humana sin necesidad de dormir o cansancio corporal también tener la armadura de Iron Man mínimo marketing 50 end game o hacerse un ósmosis no etcétera
Thanks for the chapter! We get to see overall team development, Kate settling in, Gwen learning magic (finally) Also the Ben POV where it's acknowledged that he's collected tech/magic/artefacts is appreciated. The Enoch connection was well done. Though I wonder how Ben will take over Forever Knights and mould it into an Earth Defence taskforce. 🤔 For now, he's just a kid - let him explore and have fun. Serious times will come later . Cheers 🤠
thank for chapter Just curious, will he meet Ben, who's place he taken? (not expert on on whole Ben 10, but there is some sort of Multiverse (omnivores?) with multiple Bens, if I remember right, so will he original (who he(MC) remember from TV). Seriously don't remember about what and why it was and just started reading this (so I didn't read comments and author could talk about it). This is my first last chapter in this fan fic, and according reactions, I will wait for while, so happy waiting for everyone 😁.
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