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Author maybe you can add a tsundere villain girl who tries taking attention of Ben 10yson but it ends up destroyin somewhere and taking attention of alien polices where Grandpa Max belongs to . It can be an og or you can use some rich technology genius' daughter . But it needs a lot character grow so it can be a challenge for your writing skills (a lot of author can find it hard i am not trying joking you or something . Why they can find hard because if the character showns up and love directly Ben in 1 or 2 chapters it looks bad childish and unconsidered .if you can add emotions opimions character goal and others she will be perfect ) . As a joke you can make the girl what i say a boy and make him a gay who have his own story it will be OMG ... do not take the last part serious . We are not ready for something like this but maybe a reverse trap can be good but it is not fit a novel like this ... or is it fit ?
A good storyline and a good improvement . Characters lika alive till now . Why till now because there are future chapters and i didn't read them . I can't speak about future so . Yes . Till now ~(^°^)~ . Author write he will continue this novel but because chapters are long and need calculated improvements i lt can have a lot time . . . I wanna say thanks for writing this fanfic author . You are best (maybe not but it is cheering up so take it like you are really best : > ༼ つ ◕◡◕ ༽つ ...)