KasiCair
How old is Rei and Konan now? How long until the next Ninja war? As much I appreciate the scenes of Tsunade and Mei getting along and levelling up I wanna know more about MCs plans. Does he want to stay in Mist? Or want to defeat the bad guys, i.e Obito/Kaguya and Zetsu? Or does he want to raise a neutral faction and pull an Orochimaru, i.e take over another country? Thanks for the chapter, looking forward to read more đ
I suggest that you show us this world from different pov Like danzo Like others from different parts of this naruto universe... That will give more life to the story and make chapters longer For example Last chapter you Displayed about kaguya clan culture and how inhumane; savage; barbarian; uncivilized; wild they are Won't it be better if you show us that part from pov of someone from there clan that hate his own culture and want to get away from this fucking up clan Like a mother that want to send her daughters out worried about them or something like that...
Mc should Could upgrade the shadow clone technique.... To his own virsion that could keep going for years and that clone could share with mc all what he see or listen to... A live.... So Mc could send this clone alone outside kiri with masked face to advanture alone While Mc lazy around in kiri.... Also Mc could if needed could replace that clone place for something that must be done with his own hands.... Mc could use seals on his own shadow clones
I had a suggestion for pakura If Mc will get her I suggest Mc had a secret interaction with her behind the kiri and suna back Like Mc hold hdl as hostage then free her tell her he will free her because she is so beautiful ad he won't bear to kill her.... She will had a secret crash on him but can follow her feelings cause her village that she treasure won't allow that Mc could print a seal on her to notify him if her life in dangerous condition Mc will save her later when she got betrayed by her people Mc will take her in his own dimension And hide her.... Mc won't let her go back to the village even if she want
I suggest that Mc won't only focus his interactions with Tha family or lover circle... You should create other circles around hin in his lifestyle For Example where is Ameyuri Ringo Mc care about her she is his beloved Disciple even if she isn't totally or completely loyal to him Mc should still show some care for her not on the level of his care for konan and tsunade but.. Mc could heal her if she is sick or save her sometimes....