Comments of chapter undefined of Rise of the Cosmic_Emperor

Author, quick tip: Please stop using “He would do this” and go back to using “He did this” The “would”makes it hard to ascertain if something actually happened or if it might happen,making it confusing as hell to read. Other than that this is one of the better written books in this website so keep up the great work!!

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He have a spiritua entity inside of him😨

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Thanks for the short chapter... How many secrets Hals bloodline have? why, a few hundred!

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Yeah author write story in simple past tense and active voice.... much easier and simpler to write this way no need to use complex sentences, grammer and vocabulary

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Nice~ Thx for the chap~

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