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Comments of chapter undefined of Fake Goddess to the True Goddess

Overlord_Dovahkiin
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couple of mistakes I noticed. I'm the title it should be Didn't not Doesn't. "Cultivation was this easy? How come I didn't know?" secondly where Su li says "Err, Sister Lan is cultivation was this easy?" you want to either remove the is or the was. 'is' is present tense and 'was' is past tense. generally speaking you want to keep the same tense through out a sentence.

TreasurerOfDreams
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