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At this point are there even any bigshots our death seeking Song doesn't dare to provoke?
it's almost like some one once said an eye for an eye makes the whole world blind. . . theres no way that's true thou. just murder all opposition, don't promote change, promote new ideas, or just have empathy in general for people. I'm sure that will work out great.
for the record you have four options to pick from "... is cultivation this easy?" "... cultivation is this easy?" "... was cultivation this easy?" "... cultivation was this easy?" all of them mean something slightly different but, considering the title you probably want to go with the last one.
couple of mistakes I noticed. I'm the title it should be Didn't not Doesn't. "Cultivation was this easy? How come I didn't know?" secondly where Su li says "Err, Sister Lan is cultivation was this easy?" you want to either remove the is or the was. 'is' is present tense and 'was' is past tense. generally speaking you want to keep the same tense through out a sentence.
Thanks for the update even while your not at 100%. All in all, it looks like the pieces are starting to fall into place. Still I'm happy that learning the truth has left me with more questions than answers. Can't wait to see what trials Su Li will face.