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Overlord_Dovahkiin

Overlord_Dovahkiin

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Screw you guys I'm going to cultivate

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  • Overlord_Dovahkiin
    Overlord_Dovahkiin8mth
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    At this point are there even any bigshots our death seeking Song doesn't dare to provoke?

    Despite that, a Seventh Stage Venerable like him dared to fight against the remains of a Wielder of the Will!
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  • Overlord_Dovahkiin
    Overlord_Dovahkiin2yr
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    it's almost like some one once said an eye for an eye makes the whole world blind. . . theres no way that's true thou. just murder all opposition, don't promote change, promote new ideas, or just have empathy in general for people. I'm sure that will work out great.

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  • Overlord_Dovahkiin
    Overlord_Dovahkiin2yr
    Replied to TreasurerOfDreams

    Don't worry about it, we all human here. Prefect grammer is an abstract standard anyways.

    Ch 36 Cultivating was this easy? how come I didn't know?.
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  • Overlord_Dovahkiin
    Overlord_Dovahkiin2yr
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    for the record you have four options to pick from "... is cultivation this easy?" "... cultivation is this easy?" "... was cultivation this easy?" "... cultivation was this easy?" all of them mean something slightly different but, considering the title you probably want to go with the last one.

    Ch 36 Cultivating was this easy? how come I didn't know?.
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  • Overlord_Dovahkiin
    Overlord_Dovahkiin2yr
    Commented

    couple of mistakes I noticed. I'm the title it should be Didn't not Doesn't. "Cultivation was this easy? How come I didn't know?" secondly where Su li says "Err, Sister Lan is cultivation was this easy?" you want to either remove the is or the was. 'is' is present tense and 'was' is past tense. generally speaking you want to keep the same tense through out a sentence.

    Ch 36 Cultivating was this easy? how come I didn't know?.
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  • Overlord_Dovahkiin
    Overlord_Dovahkiin2yr
    Commented

    welcome back and thanks for the chapter

    Ch 35 Hidden Truth
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  • Overlord_Dovahkiin
    Overlord_Dovahkiin2yr
    Commented

    thanks for the chapter.

    Ch 34 Side Stories (Separated Ways)
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  • Overlord_Dovahkiin
    Overlord_Dovahkiin2yr
    Commented

    welcome back even if it's only for a short while. I'm kinda glad we circled back a bit "su jian"'s storyline, my theory senses are going off non stop.

    Ch 33 Terrifying Fate
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  • Overlord_Dovahkiin
    Overlord_Dovahkiin2yr
    Commented

    Not a whole lot but, I think this was a nice frost step back into the series after a short hiatus. That being said don't feel rushed to write more chapters, please take as long as you need. Can't wait to read what happens next.

    Ch 32 The Use of Soul Points
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  • Overlord_Dovahkiin
    Overlord_Dovahkiin2yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Lollipop

    Ch 1 I'm a boy
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  • Overlord_Dovahkiin
    Overlord_Dovahkiin2yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Potion

    Ch 1 I'm a boy
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  • Overlord_Dovahkiin
    Overlord_Dovahkiin3yr
    Commented

    good luck on midterms and take the time you need for the chapters. either way woo volume 2.

    Ch 31 Extreme Nine Yin Physique
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  • Overlord_Dovahkiin
    Overlord_Dovahkiin3yr
    Replied to TreasurerOfDreams

    Can agree, qi is one of the two universal mystical energies. As for your last cheeky comment, consider my interest more peaked than it already was.

    Ch 30 The Tenth Foundation
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  • Overlord_Dovahkiin
    Overlord_Dovahkiin3yr
    Commented

    A bit of immortal mortal vibes with the cultivation system there. may the author find 'nother more different words that looks like the old words soon.

    Ch 30 The Tenth Foundation
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  • Overlord_Dovahkiin
    Overlord_Dovahkiin3yr
    Commented

    eccentric master, get. thanks for the chapter.

    Ch 29 Master? Sister?
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  • Overlord_Dovahkiin
    Overlord_Dovahkiin3yr
    Commented

    Finally we can get back down to some brass tax cultivation. I'm excited to learn more about the other world and Su Li's cultivation. It's a good chapter to slip us back into everything.

    Ch 28 Separated
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  • Overlord_Dovahkiin
    Overlord_Dovahkiin3yr
    Commented

    thanks for the chapter and congrats on a speedy and safe recovery. Nice to see we are back in the game/alt universe. Still the cliffhanger of the last chapter has my curious what's going to happen to Su Li in both worlds.

    Ch 27 This is Good Bye
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  • Overlord_Dovahkiin
    Overlord_Dovahkiin3yr
    Commented

    the story is evolving a mind of its own! Subdue it quick before it goes rouge!!

    Ch 26 Who?
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  • Overlord_Dovahkiin
    Overlord_Dovahkiin3yr
    Commented

    Thanks for the update even while your not at 100%. All in all, it looks like the pieces are starting to fall into place. Still I'm happy that learning the truth has left me with more questions than answers. Can't wait to see what trials Su Li will face.

    Ch 25 We doesn't have a chance.
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  • Overlord_Dovahkiin
    Overlord_Dovahkiin3yr
    Commented

    it feels like we're about to get some more game time. so exciting.

    Ch 24 The Truth of the "Game".
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