Comments of chapter undefined of The Bloody Falcon

Nice. Finally, not a beta MC. Makes sense to wipe the Three Sisters clean. It’s part of the Vale, right? Good strategic area to rebuild.

forget about the spelling mistake. just continue with the writing. I'm very much enjoying the story. kept those chapter comminng

Only concern is pikes in mountains terrain tends to be folly. I would recommend a flexible infantry unit, that can support and envelop any opposition. Hammer and anvil, but I suppose that’s what the Hussars are for so you choice tbh

How about creating repeating crossbows on the Chinese model, it would work against the Mountain Clans. (fast fire)

More pls release more

Una pregunta quien es el interés amoroso? Si no hay puedo sugerir a elia martell, malora Hightower, ashara dwayne o una de las hermanas tyrell

Dropped ??????

Author don't abandon the fic. Update please

bro update,it's amazing

Man I’mloving this. This story has great potential

Nice chapter

thanks for the good chapter

more

Mooooooooorrreee

Thanks for the chapter

thanks

post more! Has excellent potential, it would be interesting if his wife was Ashara