Comments of chapter undefined of Harry Potter The Mutant Obscurus Gamer
Harry Potter The Mutant Obscurus Gamer
GnomeBob
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A character idea. For Nen he gets Specialist like Pakunoda with Zoldick training for the stealth and infiltration techniques. Cost 10 13 or 19 depending on talent chosen. For Haki he gets focus on observation, shapeshifting devil fruit like Bon Clay and Rokushiki for movement techniques. Cost 10 13 or 19 depending on talent. Force he gets light and dark without personality change, clairvoyance and force stealth. The rest he gets the hard way in the world. Cost 8 11 or 17 points based on talent chosen. In MCU classes combine to make a shapeshifting, memory reading/changing thief/spy/infiltrator good at infiltration and exfiltration.
I like this story. The new one is not for me, you could pay me but I would not read a multiple MC or multiple "players", something about not being unique and how easy it is for the author to pop some unknown player that is some how better than the MC make me hate that type (I imagine if I knew in advance the MC is by far the best one I would give it a try but have no patience figuring it when it can take 50+ chapters, weak to strong is not my thing anymore, just my preference) , I tried many times and always end up hating it so pass. Quality wise, nothing to say, you wrote this novel and this one is great.
Would the magic in hp be able to be used in the force? I suggest not, because that would limit power levels slightly. However you could have some hidden characters who get the talent 20 to be able to compound there things, if u get what I mean. Like they can use hp magic to boost the force and vice versa. Also could be the same for physical classes. Not sure about hybrid though đđ
I was thinking Star Wars(18/20)/Naruto(12)/one piece(16) Imagining a Kage level & starkiller-level Jedi ninja with force-sensitive shadow clones, observation haki- enhanced byakugan( basically limited omnipresence), a logia or legendary zoan fruit (or a powerful parmacia) is frankly terrifying. Especially if he can scale his physical strength like in one piece
The build idea I had was for a ninja/force/nen class specked for stealth/speed with Byakugan, lightsaber, and easy mastery towards stealthy and speedy techniques. This build would focus less on talents, taking more auxillaries where necessary in order to have more time to grow. The personality of the character would be more on the cautious/cowardly side of things and avoid conflict when they can. Because of the lower levels of talent, the character would be weaker than most other characters, focussing on the all classes have the same cap in power, reachable in 100 years part of the introduction.
