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This needs to be edited from chapter 1 to this one. There are spelling errors every 2-3 sentences like felt is always spelled flet and others. Words are substituted wrongly, like instead of compartment, apartment is used and so many more errors that it makes it hard to read.
A variation of "I don't have to outrun the beast, just the person next to me."
Insane characters are best portrayed as mad scientist or mastermind manipulating from the dark. And the most fun ones are super elaborate and complex plans for achieving mundane tasks. Like inventing time travel because you forgot to watch or record your favorite show or go to Woodstock or something.
A seven has at least 3 pointy places, so it can't be pointless. Now 8 and 0, they don't have pointy places, so they can be pointless.
Are there going to be flashback chapters of Harry dealing with the time travelers he was warned about by Iliyana Rasputin? Maybe meeting her and pranking her, then teaching her? And a true end to the story like after 10 000 years we look on how he spends one of his days?
What about the displacement of air the Haki slash causes while moving? Can it be seen by people who haven't awakened Haki or Aura?
I always wondered if Greed Island can be played again after finishing it for the first time? Also, there are a lot of treasures in the game, so if it can be played again, what stops someone from visiting the game every 20 years to eat 20 pills and live forever?
There wasn't mention of the slow fruit, door fruit or gravity fruits? On the other thing I agree MC needs to choose balance, but does that mean the Saber eats dark and light fruit? Maybe there is other that balances the dark? Or maybe the balance is that the Saber eats one and MC another?
To lose all hole is very serious. There are holes to breathe in there.
Are the animated series considered cannon in this Star Wars? Because there is a lot of story in between the movies and a lot to do if they were cannon. Better go for the 3rd movie, mess with order 66 and possibly start pretending he is a force user with force blank like Palpatine.
Isn't Gary like 10 or 11 years old? Why is an adult Harry being petty with a child?
A character idea. For Nen he gets Specialist like Pakunoda with Zoldick training for the stealth and infiltration techniques. Cost 10 13 or 19 depending on talent chosen. For Haki he gets focus on observation, shapeshifting devil fruit like Bon Clay and Rokushiki for movement techniques. Cost 10 13 or 19 depending on talent. Force he gets light and dark without personality change, clairvoyance and force stealth. The rest he gets the hard way in the world. Cost 8 11 or 17 points based on talent chosen. In MCU classes combine to make a shapeshifting, memory reading/changing thief/spy/infiltrator good at infiltration and exfiltration.
Shouldn't there be time travelers appearing here to try and stop Harry from giving his company to Loki? You know, world domination and all that jazz?