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Comments of chapter undefined of NEW START IN NEW LIFE

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Seto_Kayaba
Seto_KayabaLv2Seto_Kayaba

ahh this is why including dxd with other anime almost always come out bad, personaly i dont like dxd mix in with other anime, dxd is already complex and you start in twgok as base that already complex, now you throw plot twist in twgok plot, changing the whole plot into something else, mixing dxd into plot, so i will see how you execute this story you make

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Seto_Kayaba
Seto_KayabaLv2Seto_Kayaba

Its okay, just keep writing your story, for me who not yet writing my own, i have respect for you

NamanyaSiAldi:truthfully to this point I don't have idea how to go about this. Everyday when I write thing I just write thing that come to mind. I actually know that this story is bad. Not just because the grammar cause, you know, I'm not native English. But because the plot is kind of create in a rush. Still, I continue to write this so that at least I can better my writing in english and it definitely get better as my grade in english get better too. Thank you for reading my story thought

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LonelyDevourer
LonelyDevourerLv3LonelyDevourer

Where's the king's arrogance

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Weirdo
WeirdoLv6Weirdo

That's all? He's strong, way way stronger.. But he nego.. Sorry, he only accept whatever they say without having anything solid in return.... A clear indicative of him needing to wipe shinto faction @ss everytime people have a beef with them while the only thing he got is something that would definitely make his family more in danger due to those supernatural grunt protecting some normal human.. Meaning the weak human is someone important.. Meaning it's Kunou kidnapping all over again..

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Dark_lord_shadow
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Thanks for the chapter. :)

DARK_SAGE
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Keep going please đŸ€©đŸ‘Œ