Comments of chapter undefined of Naruto: The Grey King

i hope he recovers that lost potential

Can authors please stop bashing sasuke , Like seriously that's not even his character Anime sasuke wouldn't even care if it was not a way to get stronger

Hey author good story so far but little advice for you. You shouldn't mix your emotions while writing a story. It will get stale fast. You should atleast give other characters their originality you know? Or u can just give your character good ol plot armour for your satisfaction.

What did i read....

Thanks for the chapter ! 😁👍

so i take it it's time to meet her father

Thanks for the chapter !!

hey there author! nice work till now. but i would like for you to stay in one POV. dont write about thoughts not of naruto if possible its dumb and destroys the immersion

Thanks for the chapter mohit!!!! Keep up the amazing work!!!

Jokes were nice and all but this just got degraded to a crack fic for me.

This book is good until you completely messed up Sasuke's charecter. I hope you get it right soon because this is just hard to read.

Of course it was Danzo, damn you and your roots old mad scheming traitorous rat. Nice story keep it up, happy to see the system isn't OP. Of course that could change later down the road.

Thank You For The Chapter ❤️❤️

Thanks

i have always seen Danzo views to be idiotic and self-desturutiv-harming

Thanks for the chapter on a good story

thanks for the chapter ☺️

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Thanks