Raikyodeus
Yo I’m quiet enjoying this novel, but those last two chps made me sad. Each to thier own, but I would have much preferred to experience the world Cypher is in first hand. His relationships, trials and tribulations rather than just being told about them. Its just a bunch of exposition I could have learned over time, rather than a summary of his life so far. Anyway its just some thoughts for if you ever republish. Still liking it and I think you’ve got a gem of a novel 😁