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Comments of chapter undefined of Symphonic Odyssey

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ArrogantSavant
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Also he still didn’t adress why the mc was treated like garbage or why he was “allowed” to steal in place of better treatment

Raikyodeus
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Please reread this chapter and tell me what you think about the alterations I made. I hope it comes across better. Thanks in advance.

Fiaran:Explanations later doesn't change the fact that a kid who's been abused and treated like dirt for his whole life has just found out that the two assholes in charge are his aunt and uncle who agreed to "care for him as if he was their own", and his only reaction was to continue a calm conversation about the past? No emotional reaction? No anger? What is he, a robot? No one, especially a ****, would react so flatly to that.
Rojikku
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"Treat him like your son" *Immediately makes him a servant boy with no education*

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doyle54
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Great

ArrogantSavant
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Isn’t fenix that guy in chapter 1?