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Comments of chapter undefined of Pokemon - A real story

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Ulloa
UlloaLv5Ulloa

I am trying to like this but all feels so forced, trainer knows stuff then doesn't know basic crap, and the nidoran have a weird personality, nothing here is organic... I want to drop it but then maybe it gets better... I hope. grammar is decent at worst, thats a big point... the only one I think

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Shinkaio
ShinkaioLv5Shinkaio

The Rise of Dark Pokemon is also a good novel

LadyDoragon
LadyDoragonLv3LadyDoragon

MC really is finding out a lot of things about earning money as a trainer only now. You would think he would prepare for his journey during the 13 years he lived in this world. I generally like to have sensibility in stories I read. Did you never think to reread and rewrite some things at the beginning of this story?

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Merame
MerameLv5Merame

Thanks for the chapter :)

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WolfLord
WolfLordLv14WolfLord

Thanks for the chapter on a good story

LadyDoragon
LadyDoragonLv3LadyDoragon

Did MC really not know about battle bets after living a whole 13 years in this world?? Why did he not get embarrassed or anything that he found that out only now??

LadyDoragon
LadyDoragonLv3LadyDoragon

You shouldn't have used the word poacher for an occupation that's not illegal because poaching is illegal by definition.

laboonlaboon
laboonlaboonLv6laboonlaboon

thanks for the chapter [img=recommend]

mertlafy
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