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Comments of chapter undefined of A STAR LEGEND ( Versatile mage Fan-fic )

OriginOfTheEnd
OriginOfTheEndLv13OriginOfTheEnd

please not to more than 3 please, or else it will be cliche

HOLYDARK
HOLYDARKLv6HOLYDARK

Xinxia, Mu Ningxue, Tang Xue. Keep the harem below 10 but above 4, for me I done classify 2-4 as a harem.

Nafsu_geass28
Nafsu_geass28Lv2Nafsu_geass28

1.please 10 girls 2.add to the harem ye xin xia

Dead_Poole
Dead_PooleLv4Dead_Poole

I am only going to say this. My belief is that 2 to 3 girls does not make a Harem. I would say no more than 10. But that would be difficult to balance and keep a good story. So I say 6 because you can balance and maintain the story while still developing a good character for each of his girls. This is where many Harem stories fail. They go for to many girls and don't properly provide for character and relationship development. So I suggest do as many as you feel comfortable developing characters and maintaining the story. Also don't rush if you need a day or two to develop a character or relationship in a chapter take the time. No need to rush it.

Blaze54
Blaze54Lv3Blaze54

u can include asha ruiya or azeala whatever ye xin xia is a good choice then there is arch angel gabriel

Oppai_Dragon_3633
Oppai_Dragon_3633Lv13Oppai_Dragon_3633

YES

NG_P
NG_PLv5NG_P

1)7 2)why not?

luis5224
luis5224Lv3luis5224

5 or 6 girls is like the max number of women that should be in the harem. Anything above that will just be too complicated. And Ye Xin Xia should be in the harem!!!!

Alex_von_graneia
Alex_von_graneiaLv12Alex_von_graneia

1). 6-7 2).Yes

Dextroller3x
Dextroller3xLv5Dextroller3x

1) more than 3 doesn't work 2)Let it to Mo Fan

holydemonic20
holydemonic20Lv4holydemonic20

4-5 and yes she need more love

Diemerson
DiemersonLv3Diemerson

Ye xin xia would be excellent in the harem.

Heavenly_Phoenix
Heavenly_PhoenixLv4Heavenly_Phoenix

can you add Tang Yue to the harem.

Roger_MH
Roger_MHLv3Roger_MH

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Dominik_PL
Dominik_PLLv3Dominik_PL

Keep harem below ten but more then three

Aldrich
AldrichLv5Aldrich

Não importa quantas garotas tenha, portanto que a história não gire em torno disso.

JapaOuO
JapaOuOLv4JapaOuO

I don't think so, leave it to Mo Fan ... for me, harem has to be at most 6 because there is no involvement with all the characters

Deedman13
Deedman13Lv5Deedman13

4-5 and no

trall_wer
trall_werLv1trall_wer

1)3-4 2)maybe

Ray_Styles
Ray_StylesLv14Ray_Styles

Yes for the 6 h, question what’s the main character *** because you keep saying her instead of him ?

Kagami95
Kagami95Lv12Kagami95

Mu ning xue also.