Comments of chapter undefined of Harry Potter and the Rise of the Protector

Story still going strong and still my favorite pure HP fanfic that’s not a crossover just waiting for the mc to make his move against umbitxh and the minister though.

I dont mind the pause between chapters if this is the quality we get great work author im loving the jouney that draco is about to go on are we looking at a character redemption here fond out next time

thw story has gotten a bit slow for the past few chapters but the fact that there is umbridge slapping makes it all fine. also I'm not sure what happened to the holy magic thing. did they announce it or did they keep it a secret I think u mentioned it but I forgot

100% believable, and the story is strong as ever. It is paced perfectly. Every arc has a quiet time. The calm before storms and slice of life before the danger. You got a good ratio mix. Keep it up it is good. Some may complain about waiting times, but I won't. I wait for almost 6 months to one year for a good chapter as some fanfics that do have bloody awesome chapters. Write when the muse hits you (rough draft), refine and edit until 'you' think it is good enough to 'you' are satisfied, and then finally release it when you want to. Ignore all non-constructive criticism. Only read and pay attention to comments that will help you develop better and only if those constructive criticisms ring true with your feelings and logic. These are your stories, your chapters, we read them when you feel like we can. Its all in your control. Just say'n this is how I think and believe. I love your stories.

Wow most fanfics portrayed draco as a idiot and killed off later, but you give him a higher roll. Good job

I have always loved Draco and hated how he wasn't ever given a chance, this is very well written

Thanks for the chapter. Btw, i hope we will get more toad bashing and fluff with the waifu soon.

I have re-read this story twice now and it gets better each time! Please keep it up!!

Lol when he listens to Aedan...

Thanks for the great chapter! This has to be my favorite HP fanfic with a very close second being The Last Blood Elf, keep up the great work and looking forward to more!

more more more!!!

Thanks for still going strong. Still my favorite HP fanfiction.

now that draco character development.. it go to see/read this chapter... but get lost draco player... it all about this

Thanks again for another awesome chapter and great as always i love the story please keep it up and stay healthy

thanks for the chapter

great chapter

Thanks.

First!!!!!! Thank for the chapter !!!

well this is actually a great chapter...all about draco...one on one talk... and it shortens the time for Draco to realize things... after all Draco became a good guy in the end...