Comments of chapter undefined of Harry Potter and the Rise of the Protector

well ****...I had hoped fleur...with the whole half veela and him being not completely human...I thought they would have a connection...but now u have him with the damned oc...I hate romances with the ocs...such a shame..

The painting style is amazing. I love it!! ww1.q-q.site/Zw195fi

I think your choice to make you in love with this girl is lame as ****. First, he's an ***** in a young man's body, I find it strange he's interested in anyone his age. Second, lame as **** that he didn't really have options. No other women approached him throughout the story and you just kinda went with the firstt girl he interacted with other than tonks. Who by the way you just stopped bringing up for no clear reason. Last, you really never delivered into her character. I get that she's pretty much the smartest girl in there trade but you never really show her motivations or desires and made her some charity case. I don't even remember her physical description clearly, never having described her as particularly beautiful or anything. All around lame

Wont lie was hoping it would be tonks or hermione but this is ok as well.

Eh, honestly I'm not the biggest fan of oc pairups and thought it would have been cool for the pure blood queen to end up with the muggle born james.

I'll imagine Victoria as the girl in the image from now on.

Oh no is Tonks going to be stuck with Remus now?

In the end his desire to look handsome was just foolish. Suffering simply served him by torturing him and hiding like a queer because the girls were looking for him. and in the end his relationship was with an OC that he could well fall in love with simply by being his friend

One of the most retartes things about fanfics that OC gf or bfs. Its just plain stupid on every level. God damn i can never understand this logic

That's great....hope he stay faithful to Victoria...no harem to that.....its ur story author....many of us like how the story goes

I like this choice. take a power stone.

Sorry but i think im done with the story i love the idea of it but the oc pairing just ruins it for me i think i would have preferred the mc to stay single or not be in a committed relationship

The ship has sailed 😭. rip

Thank for the chapter.... I saw many comments said OC X OC is s*ck but i support your decision and i very like it. You wrote it well. Well Done. Dont let those comments affect you.... XD

I suppose you did this fairly well, although I'm a little disappointed in who he ends up with. One of the fun things about fanfics and stories where someone goes to a world like this is seeing their interactions with the original cast and possibly getting a relationship with one of them. An OC just isn't the same.

Smh she could have ended up with james or Christian who would be the type of person to beat up her father.

why are there so many negative comments??? please support the author and let them write their own story. Love this work no matter where the ship sails💕

this is where i want this ship to go.