Comments of chapter undefined of Harry Potter and the Rise of the Protector

man why tell them everything? why every story has this cliche my god

This was getting way out of control, not explaining MC´s sudden shift in personality or if he was so smart he could have stopped the animal in a more peaceful/subtle way or the whole explaining to his friends which will put them under a lot of stress/danger. and what about the whole primitive way of thinking of wizards? i get it that some of them are like that but you cant honestly expect me that they still think earth is on center and the sun is orbiting around us, if a society is like that a lot of things would have been very different. This is pretty good fanfic, which i would have liked to see finished but it has so many plot holes that is a chore to actually read it....

Oh no, he told his closest friends a secret that Dumbledore, Snape, at least one imprisoned DE, and potentially those who were at the trial depending on how much was revealed, already know... How stupid of him! The sharing of secrets happened in other FF so you must do something different! ... People really love whining mindlessly...

he's almost 30 mentally and cries because 2 little boys are good friends?

This hypocritical ass hides his affairs from aunt, but does not mind revealing his secrets to strangers?

so far it looks like fucking BL story ...

For Gods sake hes almost 30 in his past life and the way he talks is like a Hero complex or something

REAL STUPID HEROES SYNDROME

This chapter made this story even worse lol this MC is the biggest Beta

This is shit I hate people telling each others secret.You act like a protagonist on a anime or something

The guy knows he is under scrutiny, and leaves that secret in the unprotected minds of his friends?

I don't really mind mc telling this, I mean it's overall not that big of a deal if people are trustworthy. But what was really weird was all the drama, honestly this was like fight over some grand secret between a married couple :D Also Christian's reaction is like weird af o.o Honestly this was so cringe. It's like mc murdered his mother or something.

True friends aren't like that. They accept you as a whole no matter what your secret is and you explain it or not. They will forever by your side no matter what the situation is and without condition, helping you in dire times of need without asking for something in return or forcing to spill you secret. That's what means to be true friend. You, as the author making their friendship like this, make it seem like a barter or a trade situation. On one hand his secret and the other his friend loyalty. So, it is basically not a true friendship like this.

Good chapter. Not sure why so many people are whining. It's not like noone knows about this already, or that there's some great reason why it must remain secret...

Why did you make cringe interaction and the mc stupid ?

some people just love to squabble. stop reading the fanfic if its not to your liking.

Cringed chapter. Just skimmed this whole thru

revealing his Phoenix, that only a few trustworthy people with occlumency shields knew about, unless im led to believe that they were dumb enough to include it in their ministry report, was incredibly dumb

sinceramente este capitulo e fue completamente fue de lugar, de como se comportaba el prota, de como manejaría una situación, desvelo sus secretos como idiota es la palabra correcta y creo que era totalmente innecesario, que dijera que tenia un fenix que le metieron partes de que criatura, el dialogo se podia haber manejado de una forma completamente diferente y mas profesional sin entrar en mas detalle.