Comments of chapter undefined of Jack of Arts

Some ways to fix chapter 1 remove the time he spent on it 2 have him plan the game first etc before making it then go back for some reason to house to play game 3 just say its tetris and not this over the top experience mc has of it, I had not clue what was going on until the music even then I don't know 4 even for a backword world I find it hard to believe that their was no creativity in gaming why not have him make candycrush, or monopoly etc Alot more believeable

Does he need to copyright it first? You know you can never be too careful.

Ty for chap