Matfield
You could try explaining a few things like why was he in the mall and how did he get bitten... it's up to you thoughđ¤ˇââď¸
I will do a flash back later. Make sure to comment and leave your suggestions as they will be considered.
much more details about his reflexion on his capacity and how did he learn how to use them so easely
I know I know. Its better in later chapters
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