Comments of chapter undefined of The Demon Monarch System

your IQ has to be zero, because there is only one punishment in your head, tell him to do something disgusting or dangerous, I don't even need to talk about the MC's childishness, keep it up that you will die in less than 5 chapters.

Nice chap

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So far it seems really good, the realistic behaviours of the characters as well as the writing flow is top-tier. The first few chapters seemed convoluted but nevertheless im sure it’ll be explained and im excited for more. :)

I don't mind the child acting like a child, but the "talktive / alive system" is really cringing up the story...

thanks for the chapter

Author, I am just curious if it's going to be a steam roll. Where he wins constantly.It ruins the stake of stories but I am just curious about this

So far very good job. Character development comin' along, flow of the events is explanatory and detail of the story is well defined as well as leaving some suspense.

Thanks for the chapter!

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