Comments of chapter undefined of Hidden Marriage With My Imperfect CEO

freaking grammar ! dear author /translator. woman = she / her while man = he/ him. misleading ! 👎👎👎👎

Wow! This mix of gender is turning me off this novel. I hope subsequent chapters are better written.😲🙁

The story is interesting but the grammar makes it difficult to read[img=faceslap]

should i write a comment in english🤣 can't wait to see how the slapping scene in the future will broke their dream

Sorry author, I couldn't make it pass chapter 3 😕 The story is interesting and I would love to read what happens next. The problem is that it gets really confusing when the pronouns are constantly getting mixed up, among other things. You need to get someone to do some serious proofreading and editing for you. I'd still like to thank you for sharing your work, it is appreciated. 🙂

what

This has the potential to be a good story. But how you mistaken the pronouns leaves readers confused

mixed grammar?

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kayaknya perlu editor deh.. you mixed up the use of his and her.

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good story

look interesting

is anya boy or girl ???🤣🤣i she/he ....ladyboy??

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