Comments of chapter undefined of MATE
MATE
Midnyt_Zun
Chapter comments5
Volume one was amazing there is just a couple of times the wrong name is used so you might want to check that out volume two is a little confusing and hard to follow cause there are quite a few contradictions almost like you changed your mind on what it would be about like at the beginning the main girl seems to be from a human village that knows about the supernatural and often human girls from the town are taken as these creatures mates but now werewolves aren’t allowed to marry humans??? I can’t follow so you might want to make some slight edits in order to help the story flow- sorry for the long comment
Such bad grammer so many mistakes . .. If they are not allowed to marry humans then why are the selecting human mates ???? Who is Shania?? ?? Why is she so mean to Jamil ???? This story has great potential if only they would prove read it and correct the grammer and mistakes ..... Stop using past tense in the presant time.... Is it the translate that doesn't understand English ???. .. .love the story line even though its confusing .
