Jen is so emotional rn!!! It feels like there could be a reason for this😏😉

JL could stand for both Jen and Lucas and James and Laura

LJ

I’m pretty sure at the start of the second volume it’s the start of a different novel cause it feels like two different worlds

Volume one was amazing there is just a couple of times the wrong name is used so you might want to check that out volume two is a little confusing and hard to follow cause there are quite a few contradictions almost like you changed your mind on what it would be about like at the beginning the main girl seems to be from a human village that knows about the supernatural and often human girls from the town are taken as these creatures mates but now werewolves aren’t allowed to marry humans??? I can’t follow so you might want to make some slight edits in order to help the story flow- sorry for the long comment