Comments of chapter undefined of Pokemon: Master of tactics

Yeah man I can't stomach it anymore His romance is just not for me Too much cringe bro Good luck with the story I guess it's a fun concept but his attitude to this Maria really killed it for me

It is the fifth time that I try to read this fanfic but not anymore.

Honestly my thought, any love story before at the very least halfway into the story makes the novel way worse. Romance is just a tool for your novel that id already way overused. Unless your novel focusses on romance you should only add it as an afterthought or in webnovels case, when the readers really wants the mc to pair up with a girl. Honestly this story went from a 3.8 to a 3 for me simply because you try to force a romance plot when you still have so much else to focus on.

Force love ruin everything

😂😂😂wao author wao another emotional drama luck plot twist mc he loses the match but lucky enough he gets the girl for date 🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕fck go and masturbate in public yo u should have warned that this is a pussy mc left a bad taste for me y have i read this fckkkkk

Fico um pouco incomodado com a alegria do MC pela Maria, é como ele disse "Todos escondem seus sentimentos", eles o fazem por cautela e proteção, para não se ferirem, mas ele não está fazendo isso, e ele tem que saber que o amor por mais que seja um estado de espírito incrível, ele também vem com o título de "Maior Fraqueza!" Enfim, gostaria de ver um maior controle emocional do Mc! Obrigado Pelo Cap!

why couldn't this imbecil use super sonic and swift while flying around??? rock slide doesn't have great accuracy not to mention ekans is not a rock type pokemon so her attack should be even weaker!

What your idea for a Pokemon team (Evil) 1. Crobat (Poison/Flying) 2. Salamance (Dragon) 3. Tyranitar (Rock/Dark) 4. Houndoom (Fire/Dark) 5. Ferilgator (Water) 6. Gengar (Ghost/Poison)

Biggest fck mc acts very cool infront of a rookie girl makes a bet twice and what our mc lost for fucks sake he lost and booom author says our mc will lose some times to make u tense ya fck gets emotional saying oh no my zubat gonna die no no fck fck fck wtf generic emotional mc ya any way i m level one so dont mind me and read if u guys wanna its just left a fcking bad taste of all its the most hated kind of mc acts cool and loses retard

I am really late, so i doubt it would be of much help, but if you ever decide to re-write the start here are some points i believe should be improved: 1) The 'romance'. Don't make it love at first sight. In the initial 'Choosing a starter', have MC check her out slightly, but then remind himself of where he is. Nothing excessive. Slowly develop it, don't jump straight to "Love at first sight". 2) The system. Make it the explanation as to why he can understand he Zubat so well. Actually, give us a proper explanation, if one isn't comming up soon. Like it being easier for him to understand pokemon in general thanks to it. 3) The text feels a bit "Wuxia"-ish. I don't know how to explain it better than that. Try to add a few more dimensions to it? I don't know, i don't write, so i can't really give you much good info. 4) Character development: This is more of a hope to see how the story is going to go. In his first fight, if he used Confuse ray or Supersonic under the cover of the Swift-made Smokescreen, would have been a solid strategy. I hope he's going to learn to use everything in his arsenal, even though his idea of sticking to basic strategies was admireable for a first fight. You can add a little comment from a 3rd PoV, or maybe even from Lisa, that states he could have done this or that.

Trash story. cant continue at all. top 10 worst fanfics i have ever read that has a good amount of chapters. Easily the worst pokemon fic i have ever read that has a good amount of chapters. All in all.... awful story and massive waste of time.

Remove the romance!

thanks for the chaper~ more chapters! the development of the story is unique and interesting hehehe. hope there is a plot where he fights red, blue or green hehehe. i'm looking forward to his next pokemon hehehe

You missed your chance to make the instructor look more gruesome and evil by having her punish some of the members that failed to tame their pokemon. (maybe by making one or a few of them speak out)

it's believable especially if you consider how ash and Pikachu interact with each other it just makes more sense for mc to because being that close is the only way to get a crobat

What happened to only 5% will be focused on romance seriously his motivation was to get that stupid date no offense author but this mc disappointing

Man to be honest, it was kind of turn off for me after reading about that romance stuff, but this lil Zubat made my day here🤣🤣

I so wanted him to get a larvitar! they evolve into one of my favorite pokemon

Thanks for the chapter ! 😁👍