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Lol I also remembered this after reading this part
I'll say be patient with getting the reviews my man, a lot of readers will find it hard to put any meaningful assessment to a story that's barely even starting. Wait till it has 25 to 30 chapters and I'm certain the reviews will come naturally. Anyway the story is doing excellent so far, especially in how you developed each and every character, they don't come across as bland and forgettable and it paints a clearer picture of the MCs growing environment. The pacing is equally good every chapter has contributions in telling us the MCs characters and what kind of world he live in, no chapter feels like a filler so far.
I honestly don't get the impatience of readers in this site, this kind of chapters are necessary for the story it solidify the world building and flesh out original characters to give a more vivid and whole reading experience. I honestly think it's a mistake for the author for uploading this story here, there's a lot of to×ic and impatient readers in this site
Wehw~ that's certainly a relief, a lot of dbz fanfics accompany goku and bulma on their adventures like a add on everytime the story reached Canon, The only difference they make on these adventures are them saving the day instead of goku while flexing their power and acting like a desperate "gig-alpha Chad". It's so cringe worthy it's traumatising lol
You lost me in this sentence, monstars? Blackmarket in galaxy? I mean what are you even talking about?? I you can please explain this part it would be much appreciated
Pls don't, and that situation came out of nowhere that it felt super forced
Looks gay enough 🤔
I don't mean to be rude but can I ask where are you getting this power level? I mean buu in its strongest is only in the trillions and now your telling us 21 is in quintillion? Or is this part of the AU like King colds PL?