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Comments of chapter undefined of Monarch of Time

InvisiblePill
InvisiblePillLv5InvisiblePill

so for so good.

RedvDiamond
RedvDiamondLv11RedvDiamond

I always wonder why the main characters in stories like this make up some lie that will come back to haunt the. Couldn't he have said something like " After I was stabbed and beaten I passed out. When I woke I was somehow healed". Now they can't pry for details cause they believe even he doesn't know

Fhd
FhdLv11Fhd

thebpace was vey good random Q they usually describe the hair color but you didnt here , or did i miss it ?? also they discribe the women body if she is thin , huge boobs , gentle or something like that also the mother name are they from the same family or do they change their surname afyer marrage .

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FitToBeDeemedGod
FitToBeDeemedGodLv2FitToBeDeemedGod

thanks for the chapter, keep making them long

Chill3dDog
Chill3dDogLv15Chill3dDog

so far the details of the characters are superb. I would like to see around the same level of details in other areas of the story. all in all 9 out of 10 would recommend 👌

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Cats_Resigned
Cats_ResignedLv2Cats_Resigned

The introduction to this story is nice, not cliche as most opening story or backstory are. Like the MC being poor or facing some family problem or just having a shitty life. Though this opening/backstory is the exact opposite of those cliches. But its nice to not getting reality checked once in awhile.

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kini_feidl
kini_feidlLv10kini_feidl

The pace is excellent. I like that you explain the emotional attachment of the characters.

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Alew
AlewLv14Alew

Thanks

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_Evergreen
_EvergreenLv3_Evergreen

Kudos

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Luk2048
Luk2048Lv11Luk2048

Slow paced but pretty good. Thanks for the chapter!

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Handsome_Squidward
Handsome_SquidwardLv4Handsome_Squidward

Thanks for the chapter!!!

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Nickjr321
Nickjr321Lv14Nickjr321

Thx for the chap

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Dumb_Elf
Dumb_ElfLv13Dumb_Elf

thanks for the chapter

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Ben_Jammin_6649
Ben_Jammin_6649Lv14Ben_Jammin_6649

enjoying your book nice start

luckyblacksheep
luckyblacksheepLv13luckyblacksheep

Thanks for the chapter 👍

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Zuzu15
Zuzu15Lv14Zuzu15

Thank you for the chapter ☺️

Oluwasegun_Rapheal_9042
Oluwasegun_Rapheal_9042Lv1Oluwasegun_Rapheal_9042

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

PinnacleExistence
PinnacleExistenceLv13PinnacleExistence

The heeck? The author talks like "When my parents asked me, Lu Wen arrived and interrupted us. That's why, when Lu Wen arrived, I was interrupted when answering my parents" you see the redundancy? And htf that excuse makes sense? If he could make them believe, then it's okay, but just telling it makes sense, won't make it so.

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Hakkira
HakkiraLv14Hakkira

Danke for the chapter 😊

LI3I57_
LI3I57_Lv13LI3I57_

:)

reynaldo_camacho
reynaldo_camachoLv4reynaldo_camacho

Hype