Shadow_Magus
I actually like your story but this part is really lame and just tossed out Maybe you will explain it later and thats ok but just because i do not like ONE part of the story does not me i dislike your work
Shadow_Magus:right o. It's sooooo lame right? I don't wish to get into an argument since I am currently sick, mostly with covid, but don't call my work lame. If you feel certain aspects are bad then comment saying this is bad and you should have done this. Also, a lot of the story progression begins from this oe scene. So I cannot change it. Sorry.