Comments of chapter undefined of Dark Rebirth (An ATG Fanfic)

its rare to see a fanfic that actually has an ending...though, what happened to his ambiguous relation with Jasmine, is she still his sister, or has it gone beyond that...and Happy Diwali to you too...

author, I recommend placing, [Complete] next to the name of the fanfic, because if they see that it is finished or without updates for a long time, they will think that you abandoned it.

What about Jasmine? I'm sad.

What a beautiful ending I didn’t expect him to meet Araki in the end rs

Aw, Jasmine never got the D.

Jas mine is not for yang tian, it's for readers who defy fate 😉 and later come to demand her from yang tian

pls make it for martial god asura

it was a nice journey

what's the name of your new fanfiction

Now finish the ligtning god doulou bro. LoL great job btw

Thanks for the fanfic novel You are from India, I hope you can create fanfic novel about Mahabarata. Never seen a good fanfic novel Mahabarata on webnovel[img=recommend][img=recommend]

Hey Do you want to make it like dd story where the mc meeting each other

Really a Great Read, with an awesome main character with a proper self development and a story that lock you from the begining to the END Really great work 👏👏👏

THANKS YOU

Thanks

thank you for all your hard work

Thank you for the nice story

Very nice and with Araki at the end it's a super ending that I didn't see coming. Thanks a lot for this good novel with a real ending, you are doing great.

thank you for a wonderful story that actually has an end. Even though it is obvious that his story is not over at least this part has come to its finish. far too many fan fics are just dropped. you have my respect and admiration author-san.