Comments of chapter undefined of Dark Rebirth (An ATG Fanfic)

Even though the little fairy has a special bond in our hearts ... this Chu Yuechan has to die ...

I really hate how you made her evil.. She was prideful but not evil... to hurt the one that healed her wasn't her character.. damn I'm so angry.. If it was yueli I would've understood.. but yuechan.. was the best girl aside from Jasmine

This chapter was disappointing, he doesn't need her. If he dared to kill Jasmine for threatening him, he should have killed that *****. This bipolarity makes him look stupid. At most he would have to wait a bit to have the strength to go after the dragon's inheritance. He may well take the purple stones near the floating city and use part of it for cultivation. Doesn't he have a brain anymore? Was it frozen?

never bully an OP brocon brother lmao.

This is sooooo wrong. İts out of character completely. She might be as cold as ice but she has morals and dont do anything like that. Even that yun che bitch forced himself to her she didnt kill him after getting angry that much and reasoned out even at that time. And if she really is a character like that do you think she will protect a weakling like him with a promise. But she hold her promise even with her life. İts really nonsense. She is one of the few in the cultivation world with morals. Not like some dumb bitch you really slaughtered her character

I think the other Atg novel from the same author is actually better in plot development that is very different to the canon. Here we have basically the same setting and development as the canon where the difference is that the mc has xisu body and takes over mc position from the scum che. All the movement of the plot are the same. the slow cultivation progress is also the same. All location he goes is in the same order in canon. and What good use is to have Xisu’s body, knowledge and comprehension ability when you have pretty much the same progress in cultivation as the canon yun che? Considering Xisu’s body/phyqiuse or royal bloodline...whatever it is, the mc should have a better cultivation progress than what we have here. Qingyue has a divine cultivator and a mortal (her dad) as a parent yet she has a much cultivation progress than him when she is cultivatin a trash icy arts from her sect and she is not even have her all 54 profound veins unlocked in this fanfic. Her special phyquise or not. At the very least with Xisu’s body, the cultivation level of the mc should be onpar with qingyue’s.

Just kill the *****.

Of course he won't kill her, he would be out of canon if he did

The MC is idiot really, first was that strange heart demon that didn't let him fu*k and now he is prostrating before a girl before she ultimately decides to enslave him and even after that he didn't ask Jasmine for help!? Like, really dude, wtf is wrong with you. You have the greatest expert in your palm and you wait till you are almost dead so that she could appear herself? The moment she tried to freeze your thoughts and veins you should have asked Jasmine to suppress her, not suppress the anger, you idiot!

Understandably I try to kill him, although I have to doubt the IQ of the MC or Chu Yuechan. The first for not thinking about the consequences of his stupid actions (removing the cold from his profound veins) and the second that being the MC so mysterious he dared to attack him.

It is interesting. I've always sympathized with this character. But in this fanfiction I am completely disappointed with her, although I understand the motives. A funny feeling.

It's one of the things I hated the most about the original, and other similar like MGA, the MCs are weak, they just have someone to protect or sacrifice for them. Here the MC had his pocket god to protect him, I was hoping this MC would be OP enough it will not be needed, it feels worth than a system cheat and more like bad plot. hope this wont happen often or better never again. If you don't want him to be OP (to anyone that can threaten him) at least make him smart enough to avoid this situations.

While I never completed ATG, I do remember this character... and I always felt she was a decent person, especially for a cultivation novel. Am I wrong? Or is the author just a retard.

I didn't understand anything, first the protagonist says he is indifferent towards her, then prevents Jasmine from killing her, even though she threatens him.

Great chapter. I want to see what the MC has planned. Slapping everyone who says Yuechan is the best girl like that was great. That things go south and are not predictable is good. Seriously, very good chapter.

I like Thai different version of Che yuechan. people are not all evil or all good. they have both. so waifu being always good hearted person is not necessarily good. it also provide chance for to grow as a character

Hmm. this whole drama is unessesarry and it feels stupid. He know against the god novel right? Then all the previous chap starting when he go to moon palace is kinda mehh and feels like he knows noting. He just know something when author want him to know something. Then forget about them ina moment then remembers them again. Although mc said that he want to stay in the time line, but he stay in it to much that force moments like this happen.

Hoping Jasmine will lay down the law to the protagonist with he's bullsh*t. Don't really understand why the protagonist is even helping them to be honest all he needs is Jasmine. If the punishment isn't satisfying i want Jasmine to beat the protagonist to get it in he's thick head that being nice will get you killed.

My Disappointment in the mc is immeasurable , this chapter just ruined my good mood

And MC is having too slow of a progress in cultivation. Speed it up author.