Comments of chapter undefined of Reborn in Naruto As Madara's Grandson

It was very obvious that man was going to betray them why didn’t he make precautions? This whole thing was a set up he has been saying that but still didn’t see this coming is he stupid?

Wtf is the grimoire? Could you explain it, so at least fits in the Naruto universe? Cause, right now, it’s a magic book of spells to me.

This has been something stupid. You dont report after the fight without recuperating first. So no chakra. Its so much bullsht. First thing to do after a fight is to find safe place to recuperate. Not report to something you dont even know you can trust.

I mean the entire novel has been one forced senario after another so dont know what people expected. His chakra happens to be drained by a magic book he finds during a crucial moment just to weaken him, he doesnt check the scroll he finds and instead hands it over to a kid who is a lot weaker than him, his so called “i can sense bad intentions” has been useless aside from danzo and the third, he couldnt tell that it was a clone or that the spy could have been working for danzo. He literally from the start willingly walks into others traps holding blind confidence in himself. The ONLY deffense he has is ‘inexperience’ yet its almost like his past life and years in the Naruto world amounted to ZERO wisdom. Its not a matter of experiance at this point, its just plain stupidity. Oh well rant over, im sure some people enjoy reading about these types if MC’s.

That curse is honestly dumb. Story would have been way better without it. MC already has a lot of buffs, putting another to temporarily nerf him and buff him later on is unneeded.

dude this is just black clover now. grimoire, horn with one side of the body black = asta from black clover. This is dumb

Quality drop big time ,what this stuPid Plot, he can do a lot Better thant tHat sin seal

Meh, a forced plot with a nerf in between.

I guess he couldn't sense their negative emotions after all.

very forced probably couldn't get worse I don't mind tho I'm reading this as a fanfiction for a reason, because it's exactly that, a fanfiction all in all dope powers tho. I already had guessed it was a demon type book when it said it was the book of sin, or whatever cliche, but tbh I like that cliche also you should change its name it sounds more spell then chakra

See, already suspicious but takes no precautions.. Walk in without recover chakra.. Like last time a single shadow clone would eliminate the danger if it's just for telling missions status.. What the **** with giving the scroll to that spy? The spy job only to give information not check completion of missions.. All more he already doubt that these all have connections with Danzo.. All in all this his teammates die because of his arrogance and foolishness..

retardismo, droppismo

Nag! a obvious force situation, dude, he's experience shinobi, he should know that if the first information is wrong, report first. you force the situation without minding the consequences.

Uncontrollable power trope huh

Damn shit was god so far. But I don't like constant nerf so I gonna drop this novel.

Shisui had a 2 tomoe sharingan before, but now suddenly jumped to mangekyo, dont know whats going in ur brain. Op mc ? I like that, but op side character for no logical reason and pure asspull ? Fk no.

dropped author nerf Mc intelligence he is close of a retard now

did this really happen?? hah... even a 10 years old naruto fan would see this coming.... bad plot... the author has a direction he wants to go with the story and doesn't care to make it compelling, he just wants the mc to suffer to get the sharingan.....

You should have saved mami that disapointed me a lot anyway good chapter