Comments of chapter undefined of The Great Demon System

Awesome chapter[img=update]

Thanks for the chapter.. XD

Hey bud, youre doing a great job on the chapters but youre mixing up the names in your rush to release them. in this chapter you mixed up abby and jayden in the scene where he was wanting to move their bodies. just some friendly critques to help you out in the future. love the book so far and ill try to keep anding comments to help you out with small mistakes. cheers

Thanks for chapter

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thanks for the chapter

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