Great story idea, but poor execution. Inconsistent story flow and random events.

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Hey everyone, I’m sorry I stopped posting chapters but I got discouraged when I wasn’t able to apply for a contract. But now I am finally able to so I have picked it back up. Also I’m restructuring the novel and making some minor changes so if you’ve already read whats published give it another read from chapter one. I’m currently updating chapter 15 and working my way to 30

When you did his intro, you should have done aka Charles Miller aka Charles Nightwind lol

How do you get contracted? I’ve been playing around with a novel but idk how to get contracted as of yet. Any advice or help is greatly appreciated

Dude you need to pay attention to your content. Not only has your grammer not improved but you keep skipping chapters

Really good book so far but you have a lot of spelling and grarical mistakes

You’re right, I didn’t even notice. I’ve been sorta out of it since I had Covid a week and a half ago. I’ll bring up his physical appearance shortly

I’m working my way there lol I’ve been sick the past week so I havnt been able to write but he’ll evolve soon

Thank you very much, sorry for some spelling mistakes, I’ve been trying to proof read before publishing but I guess a few slipped through the cracks lol

Thank you so much, this really means a lot to me

I hope you get better soon, don’ worry about all the morons

You keep calling Jason, Shane

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Fantastic book, absolutely love it. I hope the author is ok due to the chapter release drop rate. I hope you can get more free time for this fantastic book. [img=update]

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Hope you’re feeling better after your trip to the hospital. im really looking forward to more chapters for lucifers decendent 🤩🤩

I really wish the chapters were longer, espeacially since theyre so expensive. a couple of the other books im reading the chapters are twice the length sometimes three times as long

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