Comments of chapter undefined of The Great Demon System

A strange twist. This novel has some real Bonnie and Clyde energy and I'm digging it.

How touching and psychopathically amusing it gave me hope to find someone to love me

Jayden: Drugged him, humiliated him, tried to rape and kill him MC: I pretend i do not see --👄--

Well, I'm happy with the chapter if that helps? 😊😊

I really love this book it is exactly the type of book that I love

Its how evil people come together, first they plot against each other, then they plot with each other.

I hope they become a couple.

I liked this chapter very much. Your hard work is not wasted as you can see from the comments. :)

oh shit bonnie and clyde bit they are crazy.... xD

The writing is getting a little choppy at times. Dont know if it was becuase of the constant releases and little time for edit reviews. But I mentioned something about the "Lady Luck" line. There have been other instances where one word or phrase get overused. Little edits to keep the flow and eliminating more repeats I think would help a lot.

😀 👍 👍 Thanks for the Work

Excellent chapter

thanks for the chap author

I love these two!

Thank you for your work author!

Thanks

Thanks

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See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

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