Crook_Shank
You should cut those chunks of writing into more paragraphs, especially when a character speaks, it should have its own standalone paragraph. For example; I asked, "Can you tell me when?" The god replied "No. Find out by yourself. Now go and enjoy yourself with your life. Bye." Mixed chunks of writing not only make it a chore to read but just looks unappealing in general, proper structure in important :D
Information appearing straight into his head was definitely the way to go, this phantom smart phone its super cringe given the setting of the story, not even good as a "Isekai'd with my smartphone" homage since that light novel its quite low tier trash and having a reference to it can only lower the overall quality of this novel as well.