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Fighting For Eternity

Sabin_Subedi_Fei

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Thatanimeguy
ThatanimeguyLv3Thatanimeguy

hey author I love the novel already and I only mean to help because I know you said you aren't the best at English, all you really need to work on is grammar but the rest is good in my opinion

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Sahurui
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What a twist with the 21st century guy being beaten by the original... Good read

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Nickjr321
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Thx for the chap

3yr
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MiaSilver
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This was an excellent start to the novel. I already see signs of cultivation and good world building. Your English is understandable so to me there's no worries there. the ideas behind the sects and states are amazing.

3yr
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SimpleSlash
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Need an editor really badly. Except for that it’s a good first chapter

3yr
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Aoalbjorn
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Finally some MC whos dantian inst sealed by his Aunt. I like that its sealed by heaven itself

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shrEk2o3
shrEk2o3Lv12shrEk2o3

Nice start! I love the plot :D Though at first I thought his name was boy. lols. I suggest you could make it into 'The boy'.. its just my opinion. meheh but this is an awesome read :D

3yr
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King_Of_Beast
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It is good

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Ancient_Mona
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A_lusting_sword
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Is this mtl?

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IncrediblyInactive
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I like this a lot! The tense issues and lack of clarity in a few paragraphs can be easily fixed with editing, a story itself cannot be fixed in the same way. Thankfully, this story seems really good and the premise is looking really cool!

3yr
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Sabin_Subedi_Fei
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no

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