Comments of chapter undefined of One Piece: Finally Free

Death of a crewmate or someone close to him would be an instant drop for me, I avoid tragedy stories.

Im gonna be honest here okay the naruto fanfic is better than this one. Its like u dont have a proper plan in this one is like your just writing chapter by chapter while adjusting to the comments with no definite plot. The start is okay but after the crocodile arc is just like meeh. I cant explain it but its lacks the excitement of a fanfic for me.

although I'm one of those people that complained about him being too weak. him beating an admiral when just few days before his whole crew struggled with a vice-admiral is a little too forced.

thanks for the chapter 👍👍👍👍

Author-sama you're repeating quotes again. :[

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thanks for the chapter! keep up the amazing work

Thanks

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he has all those fruits just let him bite one as he is now and BOOM. Instant Admiral level. Especially the lightning fruit

Good Work

Thanks for the chapter keep writing and hope you post soon new chapters Great work like always and can't wait to read your next chapters

Did I miss something??? Why would ken say thanks to aokiji for sparing his crew all these years??? Did they meet before? Is the author got confused coz im pretty sure its luffy's crew that got spared. So he's no match to a weak vice-admiral and somehow his on par with an admiral? Wtf

Thanks for the great chapter! 😄

don’t tell you want making fake death like Sabo and pound in orignal story

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