Comments of chapter undefined of World of Grey

I think this was a different and fresh way for an isekai. But I have a suggestion. There should have been an inner monologue for MC rather than just description of events. And although MC really wanted isekai and would have planned a lot he should be struggling a little. But they way you described story it shows that MC is smooth sailing though he might be facing difficulty. In short the way of writing/ narration makes this chapter a little boring. Instead of describing events as a third person, inner monologue of MC would have made this chapter more interesting....